Avis et critique sur mon site internet

Laureline Revell

bonjour suite a notre conversation telephonique je vous donne l adresse du site que g créer dite moi se qui ne va pas svp
http://laureline.revell.club.fr/index.htm
D'avance merci et tres bonne journee a vous

Administrateur

Bonsoir Laureline,

Il y a beaucoup d'erreurs html sur le site, voici les erreurs de programmation sur l'index par exemple :

W3C Validator a écrit:
line 1 column 1 - Warning: missing <!DOCTYPE> declaration
line 1 column 1 - Warning: <title> isn't allowed in <html> elements
line 39 column 7 - Warning: missing </font> before <a>
line 38 column 7 - Warning: missing </span> before <a>
line 37 column 7 - Warning: missing </a> before <a>
line 19 column 28 - Warning: replacing unexpected span by </span>
line 43 column 48 - Warning: discarding unexpected </a>
line 19 column 25 - Warning: replacing unexpected font by </font>
line 51 column 80 - Warning: discarding unexpected </i>
line 51 column 84 - Warning: discarding unexpected </b>
line 83 column 70 - Warning: discarding unexpected </a>
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 192 column 1 - Warning: discarding unexpected </xmp>
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 192 column 7 - Warning: discarding unexpected </pre>
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 192 column 13 - Warning: discarding unexpected </samp>
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 202 column 76 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&S"
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 9 column 1 - Warning: content occurs after end of body
line 37 column 7 - Warning: <a> escaping malformed URI reference
line 62 column 5 - Warning: <table> proprietary attribute "background"
line 150 column 4 - Warning: <img> lacks "alt" attribute
line 194 column 1 - Warning: <script> inserting "type" attribute
line 199 column 1 - Warning: <script> inserting "type" attribute
line 202 column 1 - Warning: <img> lacks "alt" attribute
line 205 column 1 - Warning: <script> inserting "type" attribute
line 206 column 1 - Warning: <script> inserting "type" attribute
line 39 column 7 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
line 38 column 7 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 43 column 111 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 43 column 89 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
line 83 column 48 - Warning: trimming empty <font>

Ensuite au niveau mise en page cela manque un petit peu d'organisation... Les images sont trop lourdes et vous pourriez aussi les optimiser avec des balises alt contenant des mots clés. Il faut par contre éviter absolument les images animées genre gif, d'après une étude basée au canada les images clignotant sans linkage font fuir les visiteurs, et le linkage de toute façon doit être interne au site. Au niveau du design il faut absolument créer de la fluidité, car la ça fait un peu brouillon. Il faut aussi retravailler les images pour les intégrer au design. Il n’y a pas assez de contenu texte…

Niveau référencement : Pagerank : 0/10

Backlinks : 0 sur msn, yahoo, et msn
Pages indexées : 0 sur google, msn et yahoo (invisibilité totale)
Temps de téléchargement de la page d'index : 82 secondes sur un56k !!!!! (trop lourde)

Rapport :

Website optimisation a écrit:
* TOTAL_HTML - Congratulations, the total number of HTML files on this page (including the main HTML file) is 1 which most browsers can multithread. Minimizing HTTP requests is key for web site optimization.
* TOTAL_OBJECTS - Warning! The total number of objects on this page is 14 - consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your external objects. Replace graphic rollovers with CSS rollovers to speed display and minimize HTTP requests.
* TOTAL_IMAGES - Warning! The total number of images on this page is 11 , consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your graphics. Replace graphic rollovers with CSS rollovers to speed display and minimize HTTP requests.
* TOTAL_SIZE - Warning! The total size of this page is 413847 bytes, which will load in 82.48 seconds on a 56Kbps modem. Consider reducing total page size to less than 30K to achieve sub eight second response times on 56K connections. Pages over 100K exceed most attention thresholds at 56Kbps, even with feedback. Consider contacting us about our optimization services.
* TOTAL_SCRIPT - Congratulations, the total number of external script files on this page is 2 . External scripts are less reliably cached than CSS files so consider combining scripts into one, or even embedding them into high-traffic pages.
* HTML_SIZE - Congratulations, the total size of this HTML file is 10417 bytes, which less than 20K. Assuming that you specify the HEIGHT and WIDTH of your images, this size allows your page to display content in well under 8 seconds, the average time users are willing to wait for a page to display without feedback.
* IMAGES_SIZE - Warning! The total size of your images is 401158 bytes, which is over 30K. Consider optimizing your images for size, combining them, and replacing graphic rollovers with CSS.
* SCRIPT_SIZE - Congratulations, the total size of all your external scripts is 2272 bytes, which is less than 4080 bytes. This will fit into three higher-speed TCP-IP packets.
* MULTIM_SIZE - Congratulations, the total size of all your external multimedia files is 0 bytes, which is less than 4K.

Voilà, beaucoup de boulot à faire....

Bonne soirée à vous

PS : c'est moi que vous avez eut au téléphone.

Laureline Revell

merci beaucoup c tres gentil de votre part je vais faire les transformation

Administrateur

Bonne chance

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